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| raspberry-ichigo 2005-03-07 ch 10, | abuse::hyperventilating:: Omygodomygodomygod! Awesome plot twist! Koenma is a mortal?! ::flipping to next chapter:: |
| raspberry-ichigo 2005-03-06 ch 8, | abuseOkay, I'm going to review now just 'cause my mom is hungry and I have to get offline, but I'll probably be back later to review some more! This is awesome! The emotions in this story are portrayed so fully and so well that I can't help laughing or tearing up or something like that. You write it so well, it gives me the feeling that I'm watching Yu Yu Hakusho and going, "What's next?! What's next?!" I can see it at the back of my eyelids, the way that the plot is evolving with all of the misunderstandings and complicated relationships of the actual series. So... Yes. And I'm also reading 'And the Snow Fell and Covered the World', too! Yes. Just... wanted to let you know. Thanks for a wonderful story! |
| Spellwing 2005-02-11 ch 20, anon. | abuseYES! I was finally able to read the rest of this fic. Great work! Youve gotta talent, my friend. SEQUEL! PLEASE, I'm begging you (grovels on floor and gives puppy eyes.) |
| Sesshou's Mate 2005-02-06 ch 20, | abuseThis story is awesome, as well as VERY sequel worthy. I love it!! |
| TheLadyG 2005-01-12 ch 20, | abuseand thus it ends... A wonderful ending, and don't worry it made me smile, so sweet. And I love how you make Keiko strong, too meny poeple pass her off thinking oh, she's just Yusuke's girlfriend... Anyway, I hope you will begin work on a new story soon...please... The Lady G |
| MikaSamu 2005-01-06 ch 20, | abuseA wonderful story, showing all of the characters (OC as well) to their best advantage while remaining true to what we've seen in the show. Very sequel worthy; I hope you begin one soon! |
| purplehairedwonder 2005-01-05 ch 20, | abuseHave to say, that was quite a story. I really anjoyed reading it. *sniffs* I smell sequal. This story is definitely sequal worthy :-) |
| TheLadyG 2005-01-03 ch 19, | abuseI loved it (the only thing that makes me sad is "Epilogue: coming soon" because that means that it is over) I forgot if I told you this already but wonderful job on the O.C. (This is from a person who sees the words O.C. and runs) Mizu is very belivable. Way to go (I'm just sad it's almost over) The Lady G |
| anonymous 2005-01-02 ch 19, anon. | abusegreat story! |
| Spellwing 2004-12-24 ch 18, anon. | abuseWOW. Cookie for You! That was AWSOME! STUPENDOUS! INCREDABLE! (blathers on and on) Ahem. Anyhoo..lovley story. Write s'more! |
| TheLadyG 2004-12-23 ch 18, | abuseHappy Holidays to you too. I really enjoyed this chapter, It was so sweet. I'm glad Shori is accepting Kurama. And the Hiei, Yukina scene was wonderfully done, keep up the good work. The Lady G |
| MikaSamu 2004-12-22 ch 18, | abuseVery warm and touching, just right for the holidays. Thank you for the gift, and I hope you can return soon with more. |
| MikaSamu 2004-12-06 ch 17, | abuseLoved the chapter. Hiei and Kuwabara's "conversation" is deadon, but I particularly loved Inari's appearance, offer, decision by Kurama with all that resolves. |
| TheLadyG 2004-12-06 ch 17, | abuseAnouther great chapter... I love how you portrayed Kurama, You got both sides of his personality just right. He cannot leave behind his past and thus he will always be a Youkai, and yet he will also be a human. I also loved it when Kuwabara said "He's gone"...poor choice of words, that happens to me alot. You don't realize how bad it sounds untill it is already out. Every body is very in character, way to go. The Lady G. |
| TheLadyG 2004-11-05 ch 16, | abuseWell worth the wait, I know how homework et. all can pile up...blarg... I love your story, very touching Kurama/Shiori moments. You do a very good job of keeping every one in character ;) |