omg peter is so annoying

I really liked the first two chapters. They were some of the best I've read! I didn't like how everyone knew Peter was a spy. Hello! How stupid to trust him later if they even knew in school. I enjoyed it anyways, so thanks a lot!

Excellent story. I like your characterization of Remus especially. Though not sure I care for the title, I really enjoyed this.

Ooh...I likes, I likes a lot.

Then you threw that last sentence in there and MADE me want to read more, so I looked over to the little box at the bottom right to go to the next chapter, and THERE IS NO NEXT CHAPTER!

PLEASE make there be a new chapter, I'm really enjoying this story. Lily as a Slytherin...somehow, I like it. She's too much of a Mary Sue any other way.

so, I wouldent have befrended Peter after he hung around the slytherins for so long.

why do I reveiw? really, well im really too sleepy to write a good review, but good story except Lillys not a Slytherin.

good good, very good

yey! this is great. I like these storys.

*shudder* uggh- that was a terrible last sentence- you got me all shivery! i HATE peter! gr!
but i LOVE this story! loved every second of it!

I really loved this story. Remus is so cute, and nearly everybody was so wonderfully in character, except for Peter. Somehow, I can't really see Sirius trusting your Peter to be secret-keeper, although that could have changed later on in the story. Anyways, this is going straight oin my favourites list.

I loved the story, though I thought there was a bit too much things insinuated (spelling?) like Remus' comment about him and Hagrid being made teacher and all. it's just stuff one might say, but I found a lot. Peter is weird, too. even though I liked how he was in the fic because I really can't care less for the rat, I have trouble Sirius would put James' life in his tiny hands. Tough the look of hartred at the end was a nice touch. I've been wanting to read this story ever since I read JKLB's and I don't regret I finally did!

great story!

Great story! Very well written. Chapter one has amazing background on Remus, from violent urges to failed cures. Chapter two parallels Sirius's later stupid idea to tell Snape to go into the Willow.

Interesting insight into what people think of Peter. Lily's from a Squib family... good idea. "Geometrically possible?" That's really funny. I think your Lily's got a great personality, and all the characters are very well written.

I love these stories you've done here. Sirius is too amusing at times. ' I love the little refereces to The Prisoner of Azkaban as well. Very nice use of foreshadowing. (Ha, whaddaya know? I *did* pay attention in L.Arts.) Remus is very very sute in these stories. He's almost squishy... I think James here is kind of just your typical teenage guy, but he fits in well with the group. And of course Pettigrew (I absolutely refuse to call him by his first name) is thoroughly un-like-able.

veary good you should wright more what a great story