 LuigiHamtaro16 2008-06-11 . chapter 10it started 2 make sense. kinda. good story. my favorite part was the commercial 4 the musical. YAY! |
 LuigiHamtaro16 2008-06-11 . chapter 3...? oo/ uh... |
 Gonzales512 2007-09-12 . chapter 1Okay. I don't know how other people see it but I do. I got like a lot of constructive critisim for this fic. You are being TOO RANDOM. You tend to go off the subject a lot. Not that I'm saying this is a bad story but there's a certain amount of randomness that you can add before it becomes too random and therefore, not that good. Don't give up. Keep updating :D |
 Mega Mario 2007-06-24 . chapter 9Dude. Are you going to update this soon?
P.S.:
Can I use the legendary bucket of KFC in one of my stories? Please? |
 BROTHAIWASAAAAAAAA 2007-01-29 . chapter 1Why aren't people reviewing this? Why isn't this being updated? Find out in the next epic installment of: MARIO IN A NUCLEAR WAR!
"Why the hell am I all of a sudden in a-" BOOM! |
 Mega Mario 2006-12-01 . chapter 10Okay... This story is random. But, it made me laugh my head off. Make another chapter real soon! |
 Raykura-Kura 2006-10-19 . chapter 10Right. So will this actually follow the plot of the game? Okay chapter, though. |
 superwiidude 2006-10-19 . chapter 3the bo bo bo of mario... i guess. way random and weird... i don't know what else to say.
-chaos from the knight of doom! |
 Raykura-Kura 2006-10-15 . chapter 9This fic made no sense. You're using too much randomness. Good, anyway. |
 Melee128 2006-03-14 . chapter 8pee'd myself laughing. can't wait til the battle. |
 UrWORstnIGhtMARe(2lazy2login) 2005-07-19 . chapter 6 Oh yayness it's da chappie I like! (p.s.)I'm your r'r that asked 4 dis chappie. |
 Melee128 2005-05-23 . chapter 7I have the sonic game with the caterkillers! They are purple bug things that are evil. |
 Melee128 2005-05-23 . chapter 6Bwahahaha you share the humor of my friend who has seen every episode of the Mario bros. super show which is a good thing. Have you played Bebe's kids that be funnest game ever! Bwahahahahahahahahahahaha*dies of of a spleen tumor* |
 The Great Chicken Miasma 2005-04-17 . chapter 7Sweet as alway, NS! I'm glad you updated much quicker than usual. And thanks for the credit at the end. I consider that a compliment.
Story Score: 10/10 (What can I say? It was perfect!) |
 Chicken Miasma 2005-04-05 . chapter 1 Meant to put this in my last review...
But I noticed there was one part where someone got some "**-kicking graham crakers", something that Pikario got in "CRP: TVODT" LOL.
gOOD STUFF, MAN. |