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carsonsgirl 4/3/10 . chapter 1
Interesting getting to see what Diana's "heart's desire" would've been. Sad for all 3 of them, but as there's hope too. Well done! :)
Miles333 3/2/09 . chapter 1
Awesome story! :)
AllThatGlistens 2/8/09 . chapter 1
I liked that, you did a good job with an interesting idea. By the way, have you read the Alan Moore story of the same title, what the episode is based on?
Ardans 8/27/08 . chapter 1
Beautiful story. I love the little interjections and metaphors you use in your stories. The one in this one...involving the vase...was stunning. Perfection indeed. Can't wait to read the rest and hope you don't stop writing JLU fics just b/c the show is over, especially as regards this particular couple and the many adventures they could have.
JoPoGirlsKickAss 8/12/08 . chapter 1
that was great

i loved it

poor diana

but the future...

10/10 :)
Gijinka Renamon 6/12/07 . chapter 1
Not bad, not bad at a all. I like it.
NALIN 9/13/06 . chapter 1
NICE STORY,I REALLY ENJOYED IT.BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN,KEEP IT UP
alittlesummerwine 8/15/06 . chapter 1
Great story! I loved the improvements...
Anonymous 3/1/06 . chapter 1
The sory was brillant and I would be very grateful if you posted a sequel for it.
Sportsaholic2009 6/30/05 . chapter 1
Again, great story. And again, I wish you could continue it. That'd be totally awesome. ] Wonderful story. Loved it! Same with all of your stories.
Averroes 6/13/05 . chapter 1
Excellent, as usual.
Kyoko Kasshu Minamino 1/3/05 . chapter 1
Ah...that was great! Awesome! I loved it very much!

I think if Diana had gotten the BM attached to her, it'd be somethnig like that. Great job!

-Kyoko
the-dragon-whisperer 12/19/04 . chapter 1
this is really great. i love how you use body language to assist the dialogue. you are very detailed and good at it. most people stick to simple facial expressions and movements (including myself, i'm sorry to say). you also capture the characters well. btw, these comments go for all of your stories that i've read.
Mrs. Jean Grey-Summers 8/16/04 . chapter 1
cute
The Dramatic Dolphin 8/15/04 . chapter 1
I loved it! I think Diana and Bruce make a great couple, and it was hilarious how Diana gave new meaning to the term "Mother in law troubles". Great story!
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