Wow! It's cute little drabble. You made it very interesting and was as curious as the bartender to learn what the girl had to say.
Severus Snape is my favorite character and somehow i prefer him with OC's, not with Hermione. Provided that said OC's are not mary sue and yours is definately not. mayble you'll write another Severus story, hm? I wonder why this fic has so few reviews. It's great!

I spotted one mistake, I think that's a mistake because my English isn't so very good.

"Aw, come one," -> I think that it should be "come on".

that was good! i would really like it if you wrote more please!

ROTFL this was a great fic! Why does that barkeep remind me of someone I know? I think you did a great job kiddo. Can't wait to read more of your work (HINT HINT)

that was really original...i really enjoyed it...^.^so..umm..yeah! great job! Could you possibly r &r my hp fic:The Boy who Lived:To Speak to Snakes-if you could...that would be great...