I enjoyed reading this so much! You are a great writer, and I am looking forward to reading more of your work! :)

this fic is beautiful. i love all the characterisations and i adore your Tenten, she's perfect and so deserving of more general type fics rather than just as shipping fodder. i'm so happy i came across this fic and decided to read it. thank you!

I really like how this story started off. Family relations and interactions are so touching! The bond of friendship forming among Team Gai is something I look forward to seeing. (:

W. O. W.

Honestly, that's all I can say. This is a beautifully written PoV by Tenten that gave amazing description and insight to her unique life! I love it. It's so well paced out, with a very interesting way to present each chapter. I wish I could read on forever. XD

I'll enjoy seeing more from you. (:

WOW!o.O Coloest story... EVER!

Beautifully written! Filled to the brim with a huge range of emotions - truly moving to say the least. Great job with this story! The titles were especially nicely incorporated with the entire story - they really help set a good pace. I also loved the character interaction. Neji and Tenten were incredibly written. A REALLY amazing story. Great job!

Wow. And that's all I can really say about this story, it was truly fantastic. I can't wait to look at some of your other stories now; If this is any indication, they will be a joy to read. ^-^

~Luna

This is truly the most beautiful story I have ever read on fanfiction. And i've been here nearly three years now. I'm still stupefied by it. I'm very delighted to have come across it. Excellent job on it. And question, I'm not very familiar with the name's you gave the twins, and i know it sounds silly but are those female or male names? It sounds like it could be both.

neji-densest human being in existence- LOL
great fic

Whoa, this is an amazing story! The first story I've ever read with Tenten as the main character- and I have to say, it was pretty awesome. You're a really talented writer!

A beautifully written story of the mysterious weapon's mistress, Tenten.

You did an excellent job. I have no advice for improvement; it's perfect.

Thank you for writing.

What a great story!! I love the way you show the character, the timeline and, above all, your way of writting!!

Delightful story - really, really good! XD

Nice story, really shows a side of tenten that we'd never even think of looking for in the manga/anime. Just let me say, this story is fantastic. I loved every chapter of it, it's a nice change from all the naruto centered fics out their. and unlike most of those, this has a happy ending, which, as I said, is a nice change of pace form most everything else in this catagory. I really liked it, keep up the good work! :)

oh my god. A story on TenTen? Freakin' genius. I loved it. TenTen is one of my faveourite characters in Naruto, and she DESERVES her own little story. It was...well, I love(d) it. Amazing.