Its better now that you're not using the same HP system as the game.

And I was about to complain that you were using the FF7 battle system in your stroy. Which is interesting, I guess, it just kind of slows things down and creates boredom. At least for me. I just look at the conclusion. When I read this it feels like I'm watching someone play FF7 but with different characters. Interesting progression. I really want to call it a plot, but it feels like watching a game. I like it, keep it up. And one question. Is Simon really wearing a clock? Or are you just misspelling cloak? Because a clock would be obnoxious, or maybe you could explain the clock deal. Anyway, keep at it, don't quit. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Cool, update soon please

I would have loved to see more on the other Turks - but good job!

Can't wait to see more

Cool

Wow, so Elena new Greta from childhood (Acording to your story that is)

More about the rest of the turks

I love where this is going, but your characters are not leveling up very fast.

Can we have more of Reno in the stories and more from the turks past.

Other than that this is execelent

Interesting

I think this story is great. I'd like to see more :P

Hope we see more from Reno, Rude and Elen's past.

Like the way you've set it out

Still can't wait to see more

;) Interesting, i'd like to see where your going with this. Write more please :P

:) See, you can write longer chapters. ;)