Reviews for The Past of Tails

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Deluxe489 2007-07-15 ch 5,	abuseHehe, cute story there. I hope you can udate!
Chibi Blue Angel 2005-06-13 ch 5,	abuseMe likey aloty! Update!
neogirl7900 2005-03-28 ch 5,	abuseAa!! Kawaii desu!! Excuse my Japaneese(I'm probably not even talking right...) Anyway, it is cute, Tails is one of my favorite characters. By the way, what is this series based off? The game, Sonic X, The Adventures of Sonic the Hedgehog, or just Sonic the Hedgehog? Since it's just Tails, it could be any of those. Me and my friends are writing a Sonic crossover. Actually, we've written two, but neither of them are posted. And there were all those times me and my cousins used to play with the X men toys while Sonic tried to save Sailor Moon's pure heart crystal, but that was so long ago I don't remember any of those plots. You mispelled "enough" in your author's note. Twice. Keep it up!
Narisha-is-here 2005-02-05 ch 5,	abuseAWW! This is so cute! And cool! I hope you can keep this story going as I cannot wait to read more! Good luck with idea's!~
Brent-Ka 2004-12-23 ch 5,	abuseMaybe it's just my inexplicable taste for dark comedy, but somehow everything seems too sunny. Ah well, I thought Shin Megami Tensei was too cute, and I found some parts of Pokemon too dark. I worry about myself sometimes. There's some really nice character interation here, but despite the fact Tommy is homeless, does he really have to be so niave? I guess I'm just trying to nitpick, beware your later years in high school, they will suck all the joy out of life. As one last comment, your "Area 52" was brilliant. I don't know why but I laughed at that for a good 5 minutes. Now for no apparent reason, I'm gonna go read Thurber. I have no idea why I told you that.
TailsMad 2004-10-15 ch 5,	abuseWow, really good story. I like the plot, and you've got a great sense of using humour without randomness. A LOT of people don't konw how to do that. One thing, though: I would work on the spelling and grammar in this story. You spell a word "enoef" when it should be spelled "enough" many times. Anyways, great story so far. -T-mad
SamtehTailsfan 2004-10-14 ch 5,	abuseWOT^^
Kryptic teh Foxie 2004-10-14 ch 5, anon.	abuseAw! I tink dis is so cute! sniff Such a great fic... bawls her eyes out 'cause of da cuteness Please continue!!
Nail Strafer 2004-10-14 ch 5,	abuseWell, the plot thickens, what with the government getting involved now. It would have been dull if the entire story was nothing but Tommy and Tails interacting with each other. I'm glad you decided to introduce a new angle to the plot. By the way, concerning your author's note about not changing previous chapters... I've altered my past chapters in my stories loads of times to fix up grammar and spelling issues, and I've never lost a single review. So, don't worry about submitting new content for old chapters. The reviews will stay right where they are.
2004-10-14 ch 4, anon.	abuseIt's Miles Prower not Miles Prowler
2004-09-13 ch 4, anon.	abuseYo i just love this story and it's about Tails (Yippie) i really like Tommy too keep up the good work 1 thing it's Miles Prower not Miles Prowler no L ok bye
Nail Strafer 2004-09-12 ch 4,	abuseGood chapter, but isn't Tails' last name Prower, and not Prowler? And I can see how Tommy came up with the name Miles, but where did Prowler come from? The word Prowler isn't mentioned anywhere else in the story...
Nail Strafer 2004-08-21 ch 2,	abuseWhoa...that egg was unexpected. This chapter was really cute too, with how the fox reacted to Tommy. I wanna find out how that egg thing happened, so please write more!
Nail Strafer 2004-08-12 ch 1,	abuseThis story of Tommy has hooked me, and I can't spot any flaws that are worth pointing out. But, it's a little too early for me to decide if I'll like this story or not. Show me more, because I wanna see more.
GreyKatsu 2004-08-12 ch 1,	abusepretty good. Poor Tommy. Keep writing.

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