I wanted so badly for them to be together!! But it is logocial that they can't be together, considering what they do for a living. Keep on writing! You're doing a great job!!

Dammit! I wished they kissed eachother.

I love the whole idea of the high reunion thingy.

Chikushou- what does that mean?

Nice chapter! You're a good writer. Always keep them wanting more!!

Nice writing! Keep going.

Keep on writing dude!

Your a nice writer. I like your work. It seems proffesional. :)

LOVE IT! :3

(I can't imagine Aelita being a criminal but um...yeah.)

Chikushou

and that one too?

Quel était celui?!?"

What does that mean?

-- Sage

are u going to update?
is it over?

this was great!! ever think of writing a sequel?

This was a very nice piece. There were some typeos, and a few problems in the grammar, but for the most part it was a great story. I agree, it would have never worked between Yumi and Ulrich.

This was very different from modt of the other pieces out there. It was not like any I have ever read. Congratulations on completing a great piece of writing.

I wonder if the story might have worked better as a mystery, in some respects. It would be easy to add a few clues to the fact that Aelita was the crime boss. It would have made a great mystery.

some typos, and a bit of improper grammar.

wow, that would have maid a good movie. love, explosans, guns, the mob, new yourk. that would be a box ofice wonder. thay would never go for it. too bad really. if it was a movie you know thay would "up the romance factor" thaugh, before the last sceen of cource. I liked the end, though it seemed to me that it deserved a sequel to finish things, maby ulrich could become a thief to get closor to yumi, that would be easyer than yumi going good, and you never mentoned what happend to odd or jeremie. that seemed weard. and what did "post hoc ergo propter hoc" have to do with the chapter you named after it? it is a propaganda tecnique, never mentoned in the story, if it was it was really subtle, too subtle really. also what was up with the song lyrics at the beginning of everything...you needed more explanation, that and i've never even herd of any of those songs.

I really loved the story though. one of the top ten best i've ever read. whats the other story you wer talking about? I want to read that too! keep it up, you write, I read, good for everyone (except you really...but what-ever)that was a really original plot, definently not the usual odd falls in love with an OC, I am really sick of that one! thank you for protecting the sanity of cl fan-fic readers everywhere.