A very, very intiguing opener. It's well written, you have the characterisations down to a tee, what more could a reader ask for?
Update soon!

Awesome. Are you going to write more?! Please do!!

Hey Chloe Rose. That's so weird! That't my first and middle name. CRAZY. Anyway. Like how discriptive you are. it makes my heart happy. hehehe. and of coarse i love storys about Wormtail, Moony, Padfoot, and Prongs. E-mail me when you update pleeze! i don't know if they give you my e-mail but here it is just in case: agenttook@yahoo.com. luv to all and peez out.