 Tabitha78 10/28/04 . chapter 1*giggle*
That was so cute! You did a good job writing it. You really got to watch for your "off's" and your "of's" though. :-)
Oh, and one thing that ...if it were ME... I would go back and fix, just because it makes more sense... at the end when Hailey is telling them she cast that spell? You should change the next part to "We all lived our past lives" instead of "you all lived your past lives" because Haily was in it too, if only briefly. :) |