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Reviews for: The Western Dream
Tabitha78 10/28/04 . chapter 1
*giggle*

That was so cute! You did a good job writing it. You really got to watch for your "off's" and your "of's" though. :-)

Oh, and one thing that ...if it were ME... I would go back and fix, just because it makes more sense... at the end when Hailey is telling them she cast that spell? You should change the next part to "We all lived our past lives" instead of "you all lived your past lives" because Haily was in it too, if only briefly. :)
Mourn-today 8/11/04 . chapter 1
::blinks::

well someone got bored didnt they?lol

that was great once again if he was asleep shirtless on my couch...who would straddling him? i would...

im writing a prequel to Sundials aka we prmose we arnt on drugs.

me and dear sevvie get stuck in his damned supply closet.
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