I love this!

Pride and Prejudice is my favorite story and movie. Thanks for this great writing. I love how you went about with it all!

i enjoyed it and thx for posting

very nice. well written, we dont really think about how nerve wrecking child birth would be for the fathers, we really should.

A bit of a different writing style then most people attempt, but it does not take away from the spirit.

mnaww! i like it! so sweet. poor worried Mr Darcy. :P

I loved it!! It was a great story on how Darcy and Elizabeth went on afterward the story!

oh! how sweet - i can just see them like that! poor Mr Darcy though. plz update soon - i really enjoyed reading this chapter!

It's so sweet! I always thought how Lizzie's & Darcy's lives would be after marriage. It's written really well. Write more! I want more! Update soon. It's not a one-shot, is it? I hope not!

I love, love, love, love, love it! I think your writing is superb and I have always wanted to here this part of the story.

very gud
i liked it a lot but darcy was a bit not darcyish
sorry

I LOVE it! Can u please write more like a sequel. How did Mrs. Bennet react with her granddaughter?

The story is exactly the way I think Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth would act towards each other.

That is so cute. And so good.

Very well written, but I don't think Darcy or Lizzy would ever call Mrs. Bennet a poodle or a beast. They might think that to themselves, but they are both too polite to ever say it out loud.

aw... twas cute^^... although somethings would not have happened in that time period in England.. but that's ok cause it really was sweet^^