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ayafangir;
2008-05-09 . chapter 3
WFT?! You haven't updated in 3 frickin' yearz? WHY? It's so good! Tell me what happens to Ryoichi! I hate him, but still. And Umeda-chama! Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please plesase please please please please UPDATE! this has been a sincere request even if it's 1 chapter B.S.
ranchan-akari
2007-07-08 . chapter 3
Oh my god! So awesome! Please update again preferably sometime soon! I LOVE Umeda! Mwa ha ha! Love how you put the sister-brother dynamic in here along with Akiha's insane love for too much sugar. Pleasepleaseplease update this story again!
gundanium
2007-03-15 . chapter 3
...so now I'm curious.

will this ever be updated? because I'd love to see how this ends. lovelovelove~
firedraygon
2006-01-28 . chapter 3
Hoo boy, it's going to be quite a party once Akiha gets there (at least, I'm assuming he's headed there). Looking forward to the next chapter! ^^

~fd97
SilverWolf-Ryuki
2005-12-06 . chapter 3
wonderful writing. not under-described, not over-described. it has a nice 'flavor' to it.
update-desu.
GoldenEyes
2005-10-16 . chapter 3
Hi!

Hey! I hope you're planning to continue this fic please! There's such a severe lack of Shounenai or yaoi fanfiction in the Hana Kimi department (despite there being loads in inuendo in the books) and there are even less that are as good as this! I know you were worried about keeping them in charactor; but you are honestly doing a great job of it! I don't dish out complements (I just don't reveiw if I don't like something) so I'm not just saying that! I hope you continue; it said you have parts of the final chapter and the story outlined so I hope you haven't completly forgotten about this awsome fanfiction! Please write more!

GoldenEyes
TraaginenJanis
2005-08-28 . chapter 3
This chapter was so entertaining.. nyheheheh..

and

I like this line ^.^

"Umeda didn’t need Kayashima Taiki’s abilities to read the oppressive pressure rolling off of..."

heheheh.. Nice one on mentioning him XD .. He's so cool!
plus it was an over all funny lone >: D

You make Io so evil... MUhahahah
TraaginenJanis
2005-08-28 . chapter 2
"Masochist. Masochist."

XD ... I was rolling... hahahahha..heheheh ;
Eris Snow
2005-08-14 . chapter 3
Heh heh... I love the tone of this fic. It's so different from the light-hearted fluffiness of the original Hana-Kimi story. Hot pairings, too. ^^ You did a good job keeping Umeda and Io in character. Not that I have firsthand experience, but I would guess that Kijima would be harder to write because he appeared in the manga only for a few chapters--which may be a good thing because you can pretty much elaborate on his personality however you want, ne? Or at least within the dubious parameters that Hisaya Nakajo set. Good fic! Keep writing. ^_^
~*~mandi~*~
2005-07-13 . chapter 3
wow i loved the fic! its now on my fav. hanakimi fic list! GO U! but u need to finish (hates cliff hangers!!) now... let me think... my fav. part... hasta b that completly yummy breakfast Akiha orders! i gotta try that 1 of theze days! anyways keep up the good work! hope to read more of yer werk soon!

~mandi~
VivaLaQueen
2005-07-02 . chapter 3
You have to up date soon please! This is such a nice story!
Nhung
2005-05-05 . chapter 3
You should have a fourth act because it is an exciting story and i want to know what happens in the next act!

Thankx so much if you do
Abelle
2005-04-25 . chapter 3
What a lovely fic! :D Io and Kijima? I love the idea. I've just recently got into the fluff that's AkihaxUmeda and I loved how you hit the mark right there when it comes to Akiha. ;) The only thing I disagreed with is Kijima's character, and that I do think he stopped obsessing about Masato by the time they reached adulthood, but with so little being shown about him in Hanakimi, I guess it's really up to readers' interpretations. (I'm always up for a chat about the guy, though. ^_~)

I'll be looking forward to future chapters.
Kayla Silvermoon
2005-04-24 . chapter 3
You are now officially a god! It may have been hard but DAMN! did you nail Io, and Hokuto's sibblingness ::blink blink: ok so that may not be a word but it fits :P lol ^_^

I just LOVE this fic.
Wingedheart
2005-03-12 . chapter 1
Sorry, the link didn't appear, but it's the famous Ryouichi+Umeda pic that's been going around for a while. ^^;; Gomen!
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