 Dani 2008-01-25 . chapter 12 omg!
it is so good u have to write sum more
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 arnoldthefemalepurplepygmypuff 2006-06-13 . chapter 12that was so gud! i luved it! my only probs: you made elizabeth sound like a kid, and u made it sound like will didnt care that much during some partsof the story. otherwise it was gud. |
 williz 2005-02-26 . chapter 12I LOVED IT!! ALL THE WAY THROUGH! New perspective on the movie. YES! |
 williz 2005-01-15 . chapter 11Ans still... I'm LOVING IT!
-williz |
 williz 2005-01-02 . chapter 10HILARIOUS!! I LOVE THAT PART! |
 AuntStinky 2004-12-23 . chapter 9Wow! TWO more updates!! YAY! Well, yes, I'm still wanting more Jack. And we're almost to the ISLAD PART! YEES! |
 williz 2004-12-22 . chapter 7Good job! I like it a lot! Really really really. |
 AuntStinky 2004-12-22 . chapter 7YAY!! UPDATE! Good chapter, but I'm missing Jack! CAN'T WAIT FOR JACK! I am especially looking forward to the island part and the 'peas in a pod' part! ...Oh, wait, are you going to do the deleted scenes as well? I hope so! And by the way, smartie-teri is way wrong! PotC was so not in Liz's pov, I don't care what the writers' say. It wasn't. Update soon please! |
 AuntStinky 2004-10-24 . chapter 6Yay!! FINALLY ANOTHER UPDATE! This was an interesting chapter, and dont say this wasnt your best work! I thought you did an excellent job on this, that part would be extremely hard to write! CHEERS! Please update soon! I CANT WAIT FOR MORE JACK! |
 smartie-teri 2004-10-24 . chapter 1i'm not sure if any of you potc fan noticed this, but Pirates of the Caribbean IS actually seen from Elizabeth's pov. it's true, i noticed this while watching it closely, and if you own the dvd then look at the writer's comments's on the movie, they truly confirmed it... yeah. |
 shikyo13 2004-10-24 . chapter 5seems pretty good so far but can you please make your chapters longer. |
 williz 2004-10-18 . chapter 5OH! THIS IS SO GOOD! UPDATE SOON! YAY! |
 AuntStinky 2004-08-28 . chapter 5Great Chapter!! Im so glad you updated! YAY! Youre doing a Great Job! You write Liz very good!
This is the first story Ive read that has written the movie through one of the characters POV! Id like to read one through Wills POV too! Update soon Please:) |
 AuntStinky 2004-08-25 . chapter 4NO NO NO NO!! Please update! Ill review all you want me to! I LIKE REVIEWING! And I LOVE YOUR STORY!! I LOVE YOU ALL! Its just that my time on the web is limited right now so this review wont be very long, PLEASE UPDATE!! |
 AuntStinky 2004-08-22 . chapter 3Yay she met Jack!! That was awesome!! I loved how you were describing Jack as girly!! I LOVE GIRLY MEN! |