   ellieincarnate 2005-08-02 . chapter 1that was good...cute...real...believable...i hate how everyone abuses poor toby so much...well good write...i loved it |
| emma 2004-09-02 . chapter 1 wow... |
| naenaegurl456 2004-08-24 . chapter 1 I love it! Please write more. |
| darkstorm5000 2004-08-15 . chapter 1 This was nice, especially since it was told from Toby's POV. Good Job! |
| Mel 2004-08-12 . chapter 1 Good story, bad title, though. |
| XxXCocoPuffXxX 2004-08-12 . chapter 1 i likied it |
| Jonelle 2004-08-12 . chapter 1 It's I like it. |
| Fade Into Color 2004-08-12 . chapter 1 i really liked this good job!! |
| Kitty Kat 2004-08-12 . chapter 1 You wicked devil! You're the reason I'm attempting to write more, but I get so bored/writer's block so easily. I'm going to attempt a one shot craig/manny to the brand new song 'sic transit gloria' cause it's about a guy losing 'it' and all that fun stuff. ok, i know that this isn't a review in traditional terms, but what am i to say other than you are absolutely brilliant and i am ADDICTED to your one shots? yea... story added to faves. i crave more. now. |
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