|Reviews for Temporary|
| mossley 8/20/04 . chapter 1
Sweet! I can see Brass acting exactly like this in that situation.
| Elory 8/17/04 . chapter 1
Well that was totally unexpected.
A greatly original response. You had the descriptions of a love lorn puppy spot on.
| Taletha 8/15/04 . chapter 1
That was pretty clever! Glad to see David making an appearance! Very creative use of the provided lines. Loved it!
| Pheo 8/13/04 . chapter 1
Hahahahaha! Oh, absolutely fabulous. What a great twist on the challenge, and it's nice that David has at least someone to come home to, even if it is canine! So well done! Thanks!
| csipal 8/12/04 . chapter 1
Aww. i love doggies. Very cool and original usage of the lines given