I was slightly surprised at this story. It was interesting and has a good vocab, but Robin was everything but Robin. Raven was not really herself, and I do know the bite from Valeray mutiliated him, but his characteristics are still not himself even in the beginning before valeray bit him.

Good. Please, update soon vampires rocks!
Walkiria

I haven't actually read this chapter, but I will when I can. I just wanted to say I love you too! Thanks for your wonderful support. You're a good fanfiction buddy!

Star is dead, a nice choice. Please update.

Wow! This story, and Darkmoon Knight's story Scarlet Embrace are the best two vamp fics I've read. God, I can't get over how this good this story is and I've only read 2 chapters.

cool

Does Raven know he is a vampire? If she does what is she going to do about it? Will Robin bite her somewhere besides her lips? How long can he surrive on animals? Indefinately or does he eventually need to drink from a human? Why is Raven's blood sweet? Is it just because she is human and all human's blood is sweet or does it have something to do with being half-deamon? How was he sired was the "traditional" neck bite, or was is some new way? Who sired him? Will you please update soon?

Its good but it doesn't beat Mageofire's "Vampire's Secret"

Man, that's just NASTY!

Told you it'd leave a mark. in more ways than one.

Crap! that's gonna leave a mark!

very nice. me like. keep it coming.

Please update asap please...don't make me do the face, you know can't resist the face.

Later days

PS: opps almost forgot great story ^_^

god that waz good update soon please

and I thought for sure from the summary that the vampire was Raven and Robin was the one who didn't know what to do... you're good...