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Theos Amneos
2006-07-29 . chapter 1
hm...a bit late in the coming. I should've reviewed the first time I read this.

Wonderful insight into Anzu's character. The flashbacks worked really well, although the romance seemed a bit fast. It was an awsome example of how Seto/Anzu characterization _should_ be done, because Kaiba does not have to be a traumatized-into-seclusion, mentally unstable **.

But I've got a complaint (actually...that's the only reason I give reviews). The whole "feel beautiful" thing sorta jumped out in the confession scene. It's excusable, and is the title after all, but only having emphasis on it in the latter parts of the story makes it feel unbalanced.
The other thing is the ending sentence. It seems overdramatic and out of place and only there to reinforce the theme at the last minute. Although it does bring an added sense of closure to the story, I think the previous sentence could end it on a humourous note. All in all, I think with the lack of explication the whole "beautiful" thing would work better as a subtle back-theme, only mentioned in the confession scene once and in the title.

>.< Sorry for dumping criticism on something two years old. I love all your fics, really.
Almandine-Azaleea
2006-02-02 . chapter 1
This was written so beautifully. I really loved, it's going straight to my favourites! I love the little flashbacks, they were very sweet. ^_^ Also, well done on the use of proper sentence structure and correct spelling. ^_^
Shijou no Kiseki
2005-10-26 . chapter 1
"I want to make you feel beautiful."

I've always thought that maybe Seto might be more fitted to say that... Heh heh heh...

Anyways, I liked the flashbacks you put in the middle. It does not have unecessary details and elaboration. You kept it simple, and was done pretty well.
Overall, the piece was beautiful, especially the last line.

GOOD JOB!
suzieq2005
2005-05-18 . chapter 1
I love this story! (I love all of your stories and often re-read them). Seto/Tea is my favourite couple.
Inuyoukai-san
2005-05-14 . chapter 1
kawaii:)
LeafeKnight7
2005-03-10 . chapter 1
I loved this story! It was great! She Will BE Loved is one of my most fav songs and for it to be used in the best parings ever, makes it even better. ^_^Ja ne!
yoursolastsummer
2004-12-06 . chapter 1
I really liked this. It was simple but sweet. Nice work.
SaiyanWarrior200
2004-11-23 . chapter 1
Real good fic! I like this story and you're a good author. When will you update despite what you might think?
newpretear
2004-11-02 . chapter 1
whoa! things got pretty hot! i loved the episode when they were leaving the arc. it was awesome when kaiba threw mokuba on the ship and jumped on himself. it was one ofthe coolest parts in the whole series. anyways, good job. i might have to check out your other fics. ^_^
Starian Princess
2004-10-03 . chapter 1
I just really love this fic...^^ And the song's a good inspiration too. LOL. Seto/Anzu fics are one of my favorites and the beauty of this was, I guess the fact that Anzu wanted to make it clear that she loved Seto and all. The scences being remember were also very.. touching... Please make more of this wonderful pairing.^^
reddingice
2004-09-17 . chapter 1
Geniusgirl indeed. Lovely.
Padewan CarrCarr
2004-09-07 . chapter 1
That was just so . . . so . . . so beautiful! As tacky as that may sound it left me grinning speechless. ^_~ Thankfully no one was around to see it. My family might begin to wonder why I love the computer screen so much. Your works have always been captivating. Don't ever stop.
Kamikishiro
2004-08-25 . chapter 1
OH!!Not bad, not bad at all
Kawaii Koneko92
2004-08-19 . chapter 1
Yay! =D
Ana
2004-08-17 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed reading this
Yami Ana-This is an outrage!
Me-What! What's wrong
Yami Ana-Someone ate the rest of my ice cream
Me-Um gotta go
Yami Ana- Why you! ^.~
~Ana~
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