Yay please update soonie! Loved your Paralai

I LOVE how you write Baralai. Every time you update I remember why he's my favourite.

so it wouldnt let me review the newest chapter because it said i already did. i guess you changed around the order or something.

anyways, i was wrong. i predicted the next update would be 5 months later i was actually 7. ahahha WOW

nevertheless good chapter. I was looking at the previous chapter the other day wondering if gippal and rikku were ever going to get married and to my delight a new chapter pops up a week later.

You know, you scared me for a minute there when I read the chapter title. I thought it said funeral...

Hilarious as always. I really do enjoy this story a lot. Is it just me or is Baralai awesome. I love the way you've written him as a youth. Kind of bratty when the situation calls for it, but still mostly shy.

Anyway, it's been forever since you updated and it would make me ever so happy if you wrote a new chapter. Pwease?

good story...it seemed like your writing improved from the last couple of chapters.

this story was awesome i was wondering when the next chaper might be out


your a really good writer

im kinda starting to regret having read this til 5 am this morning...it is a good story and i want more, but seeing as you havent updated this for a yr im going to have another 5 months for a chapter arent i? its summer, plz write! i shouldnt be the one talking actually...i wrote 2 chapters one after another and havent updated for 4 months...that will change during the summer...i hope

Haha.. this story is just so great.. update soon plz!! Acctually I hope they don't get married.. poor Rikku.. Gippal shoudn't lead her on like that..

I love this story! I worship you! . I only said that because you told me to. I really really don't want to say the last part, because that would make me a lesbian. I am deathly afraid of lesbians.
Update soon!

You wouldn't DARE hurt Gippy! I would do something really bad to you if you did that!

O yeah! I was so right! It WAS Rinoa! Yay me! I should get another cookie for that. I wonder what's gonna happen to Rikku? I bet Merissa drugged her. I can't believe you made up such a bitchy character. I really hate her.

It's Yuna's mom! But it kinda sounds like you're describing Rinoa. And I want my cookie to be chocolate chip!

Who, WHO? I demand to know! Maybe I should read the next chapter then...

Even though I haven't been reviewing the last six chapters, I think this is a really good story! Sometimes I go a little overboard with reviews. I'm really enjoying this!

Man, it's been a long time since I read any X-2 fanfiction...I got bored of it for a while, but now I'm back in the fray! Also, I read this story for the first time about a year ago. Imagine my surprise when I checked the list now and saw it, I was like "Oh, she updated!" Seriously, you need to finish this fic, it's really good, although a bit one-tracked.

Update soon!

/the swed/