Aww. I like the little touches like Sirius calling the ladies 'darling' and James thinking about proposing to Lily. Cute!

Aw, so cute, I like how you made their personalities. Sounds exactly how I imagined them, great job!;)

Great story very very good!-(Erin)J.E.A.R.K.Potter

That was so cute... adorable... i loved it, they have such a cute relationship - they're in love, and they show it in a semi-innoccent way. I'd love to know how James proposses...

Queenie-

Your writing is excellent. So whimsical and lovely and real. The characters POP! they're so alive.

:)

(can't believe school's starting up so soon...that means less time for writing! Ick!)

-Goddess

ah! how sweet! I really liked it!
Hey...could you possibly r&r my hp fic? The Boy Who Lived:To Speak to Snakes?
...anyways...great job! Write more! ^.^
~The Amazing Wombat...was here~