I know this is an old story, but I happened across it and it interested me!

The pairing was strange at first, but soon enough I had a little soft spot for them. It was a very well written story (as far as plot and descriptive-ness. I will admit there were many typos/grammar errors, but that's fine if the fic is good enough XD)

Anyways, I'm glad I read this, even if I've only played Blazing Sword once (I wanted to finish FE 6 and 8 first, before replaying any of them)

A cute ending! (I didn't choke on the fluff... Then again, I love fluff!)

Great fic! Even if it's old XD

One of my favorite fanfictions I've ever read. Fantastic job 3 3 3

Well, this sure gives a badass account of Sue's parentage.

Very well done. Nice and fluffy, and so sweet. A bit queasy though, with the sweetness, but happy endings and not so horrible experiences should never be bad things.

Thank you for writing this.

Good story that I rarely sees... Frankly I like WilRebecca and GuyPriscilla more but since its only a passing pairing, I could careless

Nice pairing! Never thought of it but I also thought that NinianEliwood and RathLyn is too overdone! Besides if they did, then it would have been told to us at some point that Roy is part-Dragon and Sue is actually the legal heir to one of Lycia's house!

I hate NinianEliwood and RathLyn or LynHector so much I'll normally press the back button at the first hint! Seriously, if Lyn is Lilina's mother then Lilina would act... a lot more tomboy probably?

...I don't know what to say.

You're a good writer, Lizzy. Infact...you're too good...

I don't know whether to love you or hate you. You wrote a story with the world's strangest pairing, yet you still manage to get me to agree your idea. I think...you're better than me. I don't meet a lot of people who are better than me, even if I'm only 12...

I don't have an account on because I really don't know how to post stories if I get one, but I have read plenty of stories...you're pretty good. And I respect you.

Like I said...

You are good...you are too good...

It's always nice when an author makes a good case for a non-established pairing. I enjoyed reading this.

I really enjoyed reading this story! Rath/Ninian really is an odd pairing, but I love odd pairings! Thank you for making is fic. _

Best yet. End of story. I figure you've probably realized that I've been combing your fics and reading any of them on stuff I know decently.

The descriptions in the beginning were simply amazing. They fit the characters perfectly and gave even those who haven't played FE an accurate picture of the characters. Kudos to ya.

Once again, your imagery is great. I didn't just read this story, I lived it, probably as Guy cause swordmasters rock. I could see everything you described and felt everything you mentioned. It was pure greatness.

Final note. LATIN PWNS ALL! I knew I would use that latin after taking three years of it!

Later again,

Rex

dude, you have taken a step WAY outta bounds! You have single handedly made RathxNinian my favorite couple EVUH!...Actually, you win by default. there is NO ONE who will write a fanfic with RathxNinian. Not even any fanart. i checked the whole Information Super Highway! Nothing! Anyway, i read this story about six months ago, loved it, and reccomended it to all my friends. PLEASE make a sequel, another story with rathx ninian, or a story with GuyxNino. I know you can do it! If you ever find anything else ever on Rath x Ninian, drop me a review and ill try to check it out. C ya! (headexplody.)

*ahem* RathxNinian...is just...WRONG! Ew...oh well Ninian could sure use a partner in this story...but Rath? It's not that Rath is a bad guy or anything...but he and Ninian are plain WRONG! . Oh yeah and by the way, EliwoodxLyn is also WRONG too! . yuck.

ok um...about that kissy part...you got the idea from a picture on right? Yes I saw it...and it was NOT a pleasant sight. Isn't that called "plagiarizing" or something unless you're the real artist of the picture... which I higly doubt.

Poor Ninian! Ok, I so agree with hor D'klass! Nice story...but I hate the pairings.

This is so fun! hope you make another sroty but please pair lyn to others.

What an unlikely pair!

Yet a sweet fanfiction!

Ok if feel stupid for asking you to update since you already finished...but great story!