i really love this. that's all i can say. i love it. :)

Omg this was so good. I loved it. are you going to right more of this. Like maybe this just being a prolouge for another story. It's wonderfully tantilizing. Right me back if you decide to continue.

OMG this was so good. are you going to continue this? its amazing! Very dark but in such a god way!

That was so sad. It was also very well-written. It makes me really wish there were more. Lovely job.