Nice twist.

nice and interesting

Loved this one too.

Sorry. I'll leave you alone now.

Wow. That was some powerful stuff.

Very convincing charcterization of our dear Fred.
I loved your plot, your writing, your detail, your dialouge... I loved everything about this fic.

You have a talent that I would kill for. Kudos.

Okay this was definately on the interesting side... but then you twisted it at the last line. I hope you continue, there needs to be more to this.