I love it! it's nice to see how Chichi loves Goku despite everything that has to happen next to him :D. very good fic ;)

Ah, a serious work. Variety is the spice of life, after all; nice to see someone branching out. The dialouge is very good. Enough coloring to keep in character, but not competely derivative. The description and setting; not so good. You might be relying on the series to provide the scenery, which is well and good. However, not all of us have photographic memory. A paragraph or two describing the general background helps to put the rest of the passage in perspective.

You're showing definite improvement over your earlier work. Just follow the theory of continual improvement, keep writing, and you'll eventually be perfect!

Cool!

VERY GOOD

that was good :D:D! The goku-chichi stories are *so* rare and I am so glad to find one here ;p! Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more of your works ;p

I always loved this story. The way it ends is just so sweet, reading this can always brighten your day up a bit.

eeeeeeeyaaaaaaa!CUTE!FUNNY!

I KNEW IT! When I saw Star Otaku, I knew it was you from your web-site! " The way to a Saiyan's heart, is through his stomach." Your website is one of my fav places to go, b/c it is one of the ONLY Goku and Chi Chi websites I've seen, that is any good. I would like to comment you on your fanfic work too!

I-I dont k-know what t-to say it w-was SO GOOD!PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING YOU HAVE TRUE WRITING TALENT!

Oh oh oh! This is exactly like it almost. Tai Yung at first actually, goes crazy over her and tries to make Jessie remember, but then they get divorced, but that was Jessie's idea since...still very good.

Oh, let me think...I remember this story! Um, well, at least it was sort of like this. In Detective Invesigation Files, Jessie, the female main character loses her memory and...anyway, interesting.

It was terrific! I did think Piccolo needed a bigger part,but at least he was mentioned! In a lot of fanfics don't even have him in the fic period! Oh,well,I'm glad he was mentioned.How was Chi Chi sopposed to feel about Piccolo?The same,a little more as if he were a friend or what? Not asking to be mean,just wondering.It sounded harsh when I asked that,sorry._

Great way to end it, loved the entire story, your really good! Keep it up, k? .

How sweet! _

Oh... this was sweet. I haven't actually read the previous parts (i'm rummaging for them now) but I still understood this one. It was a nice piece. _