Update please

Oh, SWEET!You are good. You are very good. I just discovered your story. You are on my Author Alert list. Ahem...
PLEASE DON'T MAKE IT AND ARTY/HOLLY PLEASE DON'T MAKE IT AN ARTY/HOLLY PLEASE DON'T MAKE IT AN ARTY/HOLLY FOR THE LOVE OF MIKE, PLEASE!

AGGHGHH! update! i need you to! this story is so good! so good! please update! Your loyal fan, booksrule39

Ooh...update soon!

please continue!

And it's a cliff hanger! Great chapter...I really enjoyed it, especially the interaction with the cotton candy lady. Keep up the great work!

ho hum good chappy

Wow. This story is just, wow. I'm at a loss for words. Please update soon.

IF u can barely manage to write this, then plz don't write it as it is very annoying when ppl write and don't finish. WRITE WHEN U KNOW YOU CAN FINISH, SIMPLE AS THAT. bESIDES THAT, I like your story.

wow i must have missed this before, sorry. anyway...cool chapter! ^_^ loved her trying to report, that was funny. root is so funny!

suspenceful to say the least, also there is a cliffhanger, i'm interested, please write another chapter quickly. it's ok if u dont for a while, but after a while, i might go crazy and make u write another chapter. jk. my storyies need some reviews so if u would R&R that would be awesome.

Ooh, it was Holly. Like we hadn't guessed that already. Excuse my blatant sarcasm, I haven't had my coffee yet. Update soon, and are there gonna be an pairings?

Great story :D! Please update soon, for the sake of your readers' sanity.

I like this story so far. Please update soon!

artemis at a carnival, lol ^_^ such a cool idea!