The two sections of this go SO well together. I think this story is perfectly finished as it is, no more would be nedded. Lovely story.

Very cute. And sad. I almost cried.
And I really like your writing style.
A second chapter would be very nice...very very nice...please write more. :)

You made me cry, you evil person.

first off: Maglor is MINE!!

now that we've cleared that up, i like the story. the writing style isn't one i particularly fancy, but i like how he reminisces, and how cute the two of them are when they are young. "Must I baby-sit you to the very End?"
poor Maglor... i like how he wonders about Death, and how he envies Maedhros becuz he could see them all again, and it's all over for him. "Why not take me, last of the damned house of the Kinslayers." and his concern for Elrond & Elros are good. Memories that are like dreams from long ago... good

Awesome Naz! Keep in mind I haven't read the Sil but it was very cute ^_^ I enjoyed it greatly. So pretty :D Write a chapter two if you'd like-twill read it.