damn i read this 3 month's ago and iwas hoping the next chapter would be up!

i just happened upon your story here and i love it. please say there is a hope of it being continued! thanks for sharing.

Please say that ther is going to be more of this story? Please?

So I just found this one. Nice start. Loved the Daniel bits, I find it hard to write Danny. Anyway... Are you going to finish it? I think you should. Make muse do it.

okay you have me totally fricking hookedi cant wait to read more! it's a fantastic story kjeep it up!

Now that "What Will It Take" is completed, you can return to this very intriguing and exciting storyline. I believe you were thinking about this before "Moebius" was even hinted. Great minds ... please don't abandon your version of going back into ancient history with SG-1. You've made a great start!

Reminds me of spoliers about going back in time that far for the episode Mobius(sp?). Do write more on this, will you? I really did like it.

Glad to see the first chapter is now back on this site- this story has really grabbed my imagination- I love it so far!

i was just wondering if you were ever going to start writitng this story again, b/c i think it's excellent.
-J

This is such a great story idea and I love how suspenseful it is before they open the sarcophagus. So... do they live? (Cmon Muse!)

What happens next?! I must know, you are so cruel to leave us hanging like that. AUUGH! Please have Muse back in action.

beautifully written but desperate for next part of the story.Please post asap and thanks for what's been posted so far

This is really well-written. I actually was intrigued from the beginning, even before the suspense and excitement. Coming across a purely introspective narration that's actually fascinating is very rare for me. The environment was so well depicted, I could almost smell the dust and feel the heat. And with the pace, it set a somber tone that was proper for what was to come and that made what was coming all the more of a surprise. Great build-up.

I like this. It's a very origional idea, and it stays with you even after you've read it. Please update this soon.
It's god! *smiles*

You cant leave this here. You have to update it at some point in time. Please for the love of all things holy.
Please update, have to know the backstory, if there is one
Cheers
Max