I like this to no end. I have no ideal why but i do!!

This story right here is AWESOME. that's all i can think to sum up the feelings i'm getting for this. It was short but it was long enough i think, it was melancholy but not depressing, it was sadistic but just enough to bite a little, and it was powerful but it was laid back too. Am i making any sense? whatever i don't really care if i am or am not, it was just way too great for words, so yeah, great job

thats so beautiful and so sad,
I really like your story

Woah. I've never really bothered to read a Pip/Damien 'cause the pairing doesn't really appeal to me, but this was great. I love the way you worded everything... it was very descriptive and I like how you made Pip the slightest bit sadistic. Nice. :)

Blimey XD
No one writes Pip and Damien like you. There just isnt anyone else, which is such a shame. They're such an incredible couple, if thats what you want to call it.

Pip is a powerful character in this too short of a one shot. Sadistic really, yet I adore how he's thinking of Damien when all these...things are happening to him. When he sees certain people, objects, how they all relate to Damien. Le sigh. I will always be your fan with Pip and Damien and I will read everything you write concerning them, because really...I cant get enough of them and how you write them together.

I really wish this was longer. It was well written and I like the narrative/POV you wrote it in. Very nice. XD

Oh my gosh, the last line was so, so powerful and I LOVED it.

This whole thing was amazing, really, PipDamien is one of the most awesome pairings ever and how you wrote that Pip loved all the pain Damien gave him and stuff. Awesome.

I also liked the line, "She was smoking a **, he was remembering one."

Awesome line as well.

This is definately going on my favorites and I hope to see more from you. I'm off to read the rest of your South Park fics now ^^

=O I like this one too! And BTW I like your art on deviant. I never knew that was you! You're style makes mine look like crap. *laugh* Good story! I'll go read your others now too! ^^

This is my absolute favorite Pip/Damien fic on the entire site, for its absolute wonderfulness. Words tend to disagree with me, so I've never been a skilled messenger delivering them, but I hope you know how fabulous I think this fic is. (shakes head in awe. Gives author a taco. Wanders off)

interesting... that's all i can say. good though, good story. :)

ahem.. I would love to say that if you don't continue this that i would hunt you down and kill you but... i would probally get in troube... and it's not true by the way (I could never kill anyone)... just wanted to say that the fan fic was awesome... and i am hopeing that you will write more... (sorry if my joke offended you ... and sorry for apoligizing so much)

...wow, I really like it. I can't really think of anything else to say...

I love Damien/Pip ^.^

aw! I love this story, we certainly need MORE damien'pip stories, so keep with the good writing!! I,WE DEMAND IT! tnx ^^

Awesome story. I love the way you portrayed Pip. He's really a messed-up little guy. There aren't enough Damien stories;I'm glad you wrote this one. Great story. Keep on writing.

This was great! I'm going to have to watch those episodes again when I have the chance. I didn't realize until recently how long it'd been since I'd watched the earlier seasons. Keep it, I love your writing.
-Sapph