This was really good, and I can't say that about most fic... yes, you used the lines from the screenplay, but filled them in. Someday when ER is off the air, people will be clamoring for the good old days and reliving the saga... you should consider writing more of these as "novelizations"

HOLY CRAP THAT WAS GOOD! Even better than the other ER one. You're really good at writing from Carter's POV so, hows about doing it again? PLEAZE?

(The ducks give this one 6 2/3 stars)

AAAWWW! Thats was really good! _

Nice subtext! Maybe now Carter can get well!

Belive me...the Carter/Chase talk was the 'only' thing I really liked in that episode. *And was it me, or can EVERYONE in the ER speak Spanish? lol* Love how you got into John's head. Great job. :)

Good Job.

Thank you for writing that...I didn't catch all of it on the show.

oh, interesting, and damn you know every line of the show! hehe...write morethena