The story line is good and you have a nice plot going, but you are progressing way to fast. You need to flesh everything out...You are going to loose alot of readers because they get bored quickly when there is no depth to it. If you get a chance go back and add alot to the story.

Very interesting though.

Great story!

inteersting

How sweet!

WHAT?
NO! She cant die!
that was suprising and its sad
its also sad you are gonna end your story
but oh well
the chapter was amazing
please update soon

Can't wait until the next ud!!

Oh gosh oh gosh oh gosh! Cadence noo...! Go Chris! And Present Leo revenge her! Oh gosh this is so sad...cry...two more can't wait to see what happen to all the sisters and along with the other ^-^yet sad it ending...cry...but good job go~

Oh My God! wat a cliffhanger
that was freaking awesome
i absolutely love ur story
read it about a less than a year ago
and rereading it again
and this story gets better every time
well writen so much angst drama emotion
and all that good stuff
hope you update soon please!

Please update!

Please don't leave the story like this! I have to know what happens! Keep it up! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Wah! No don't leave it hanging! Leo is not going to like to hear who injure Cadence...Phoebe and Prue got to snap out of it soon...

NO! I must know what happens...Please update soon!

Wah! Yeah you update it! Like the twist in the story I also really like it if you keep going with your original plan of more episodes! Great job on he chapter^-^ And Early Merry Christmas to you too. ^0^

wow now that is good

cool intresting
i like it
update soon!