u should make this a full story, about what happend after his eath. What happen to Donald Love,and the others? What happened to 8-Ball? Make a story of this!

Greetz, Jay

Wow. That was suburp. A very great story. I loved it. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Please *sob* WRITE MORE!

cool story

Wonderfully written; a 10 star piece if I ever saw one! :)

Oh that was so very GOOD! I really liked your story! (Though you killed *him*...gr..) Really nice piece of work here, keep up the great work!

It was a good story. I was left wondering who the person was that he killed. Just a suggestion: maybe you can write about the person he's about to kill and how he feels about it.

Damn, nice way to kill the killer. You've gotten so much better at making stories come together, and your eye and sense of detail is coming along very, very well. I'm glad you wrote this fic, it's great, and rather powerful. Your writing has really evolved. I'm proud of this peice for ya.

Maverick

Wow. That was intense. This was a very good short fic involving the main guy from Liberty. Great detail, great (but sad!) ending too. Writing more about his thoughts and veiws of things in his head would've been nice, or in case you write future fics. I would be very happy to read more short fics, or even longer ones from you concerning GTA I. Keep up the nice work!

Wow. That was a good short story. I highly recommened this story to GTA Fans.

*looks at gta 3 guy lying there* You... killed him? You killed him again! Lol. Actually this was very good, the beginning was a little confusing, but no big deal. Nice...

8/10