OMG SO COOL. yep that's definly Nitro alright the dark evil godess XD please write more fanfics

This is beautiful. I love the words and phrasing...

What a bittersweet story! I really liked this. (Expesialy since it was of my second favorite character, my first being Birdman). Keep it up! You're a good writer.

very dark! i love it

Oh, that is beautiful. I love how you portrayed Nitro and her emotions. You make her seem not so...sadistic. And I love how you based this off of her final moments of life. Seriously, that was my most favorite cutscene in G:Ash, but anyway... Back to the point.

This fanfic seemed one-shot, but it's one of the greatest I've ever read.