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It is very confusing.

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BUT I LIKE IT!

I agree withGin on both things.

1. I liked it too! I'm a fan of Haibane even though I've only seen the first 4 or 5 episodes. Well, it was enough to understand whatyou were writing about.

2. It is kinda angsty, though. I think maybe you should put your story in the Agnst genre, as well as Drama.

- myukiori

This was very well written, and I dont know if this was just me or not, but it seemed kind of depressing. I don't know if that is what you were aiming for or not, but I did like it!