I'm sorry, I really tried to read this story because it sounded like a good one from the summary, but I just can't get past your writing style. But that's just me, everyone has their preferences. I think your style is a bit jumpy. Like, you state facts of what one persons doing for 2 seconds then another person for 2 seconds, calm down and concentrate on details for a little bit. Maybe you did change in the other chapters and I didn't notice cause I could barely get through the fight scene in chap. 1. And I also think you have too many crossovers in one story. And if you are going to have that many, you should kind of give them a bit of a background before you jump into the action, like who is Jade? I know the x-men, not all the others. So basically my advice is to give more details and descriptions.

Atilia Dawn Black

OMG, Bats has dirty dreams about Catwoman? So wrong. . .must wash brain! That line about the utility belt made me laugh out loud! Heh, and Logan'll go schitz over his bike - if it were me, I'd blame Scott! But I'm very mean to Scott. . .

I found the idea of prank-calling superheroes wierdly funny - "Hello, Flash? Is your refrigerator running?"

"It's me, Bruce. I just can't deny my feelings for ou anymore! Run away with me! We'll live in sin forever and. . .sorry, Wonder Woman? I was trying to get Cat Woman!"

Ahem. The image of Riptide hitting Gambit over the head with a cast was also pretty funny.I can just see him going cross-eyed and muttering "Mon Dieu!" or similar. . .uh, I'm in a weird mood tonight, does it show?

Good job.I agree about the dialogues though.It is good that you are improving in every chapter. Keep it up!
Luv ya lots!

BTW, I updated QOTSK2!
Finally...*TT*

Sorry for the late review. Got tangled in real life stuff. Err...you wrote everyone's dialogues in one paragraph again. It's extremely hard to understand who's saying what and to whom. You should correct and repost this. Oh and good news, I updated 'R for Revenge'

Well I tried reading this but I just get the feeling I'm missing too much for instance the bit with Jade and pokemon? Plus I've never seen Inuyasha.

Plus I don't see why they wouldn't believe them all they had to do was check Cerebro for an x-gene.

Also you got a few really bad spelling in this like Sand Francisco (San Fransico) Hollywood is one word. Mainly I don't comment on spelling errors but I try the line as names.

Oh no I haven't given up on my story. I'm just having exams right now.

It's Ken Ichijoji from season 2 of Digimon,baby!

~Spice~

Great job.I do get the quizzes.Sorry it's been so long.I'm sorry if I getting impatient with me but after those 2 weeks up, hopefully I'll update so u can.

Luv Ya!

~Spice~

great job.

Sorry for the late review. Busy with studies as usual. Err...you kind of wrote everyone's dialogues in one paragraph, which made it extremely hard for me to understand. Hehe...but (Todd or Remy?) trying to eat Pikachu made me giggle. BTW, I visited your website. Your art was cute ^_^ The Batgirl section was really cool. Great job! Well write more soon.

Hey! The computer’s actually still working! Wow, can’t use it for days and days and suddenly it decides to behave…anyway, I liked the new chapter. Batman! I was just reading a NML comic and now a Batman fic too. Riptide and Amara getting closer, I’m weirdly fond of these two together. And Remy’s psychotic episode with a microwave made me laugh out loud! I can’t think who Ken might be – maybe I’m just dense. Glad to hear you’re writing chap 11, hope to se it soon on my brand – new computer! Coz this one is not co-operating…As to next chapter desires, aside from looking forward to more Batman and Logan interaction I can't think of anything off the top of my head - I'll trust your judgement!

Alright, if you want my opinion on Batgirl...you're getting there. Equipment is still a little big for her to use, unless you're going with the idea that this is before she lost her ability to speak again (I think it was issue 11 or 12...). This is a very interesting story, but it's kind of hard to follow--too much going on in each chapter. Maybe attempt only two groups in each chapter, so you can flesh it out. Don't rely solely on dialogue, either. And make sure your tenses agree. If this is all supposed to be in the first person, keep it there.
Best of luck! ^_^ Overall, montaza! (Sorry, my arabic getting away from me...I need to practice badly...)

Hi. Sorry that it took such a long time to review. *Sigh* Exams. *Blinks* What's this? A PC chasing girls? And is it me or have I read the Riptide and Amara scene before? Hmm...As for your quiz...is Ken the character from Street Fighter? Cause that's the only Ken I know. Lol. And *Gasps* you're making a pic for your fic? I'm making one for my fic too ^_^ Though it will be half a year before it's completed :-( Stupid exams and tuitions. Oh and by the way, I update 'R for Revenge'

Hey, sorry it took me such a long time to get to reviewing (I hate exams, grumble grumble). I liked the idea of Clovers hairspray falling into the wrong hands. The horny computer will make things interesting! And yay, Batman and Wolverine in the same room would make for seriously grouchy conversations. . .