awesome, thanks for sharing!

potential, but to be frank - i stopped reading half way through.

Two things you should slap your beta for:

"it was her that had class ‘issues’" to

"it was (she who) had class 'issues'"

"do with (having) my consciousness raised" insert a possesive verb, ie. having.

Nonetheless, your guitar references were fluid and realistic - and the 'Harvested them...crazy brother' paragraph was perfect.

wow. that was awesome.

your portrayal of young giles enchanted me.

aw, that's so sweet!

Go Giles!