 Kiara-Katana 2005-07-23 . chapter 1This is an excellent piece. Still it made me laugh, quite a bit, despite it's serious nature... I don't know maybe I'm just wumped in the head ordo you see the humor in it too? Regardless... Excellent work. Better than I can do. |
 Eternal Dragon101 2004-08-15 . chapter 1Well Gigi13 it actually wasent Conner or Cordy's fault. Cordy was possesd by a higher power (Jasmine) and Conner well he was friendless, he had just come back from a hell dimension, and he lives above a museum. That togeather equals one confused, vulnerable, and unhappy kid. However I did hate that scene in Rain Of Fire because I am a die hard Cordy and Angel shipper.
Flames Out
Dragon
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 Gigi13 2004-08-15 . chapter 1Very, very nice. I wish Angel really did kill Cordy and COnnor for what they did. |
 Liz 2004-08-14 . chapter 1 Wow. I'm not familiar with the whole Angel storyline or characters, so I can't comment on that aspect. But I like this. It's funny and bitter and cynical. You get into his head wonderfully, with the flashes of hatred, accidental thoughts, and the self-inflicted penance. Also established the sense of need or maybe desperation. The feeling of must - the "I can't help myself". Great writing.
Much loff,
Liz |
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