| Reviews for 1st year at hogwarts |
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LegendaryLostSoul 4/10/05 . chapter 14excellent story all in all. ill be checking the next |
LegendaryLostSoul 4/10/05 . chapter 13hey the last two chapters were pretty good. i lik the fightin. u might want to chech 4 grammar |
LegendaryLostSoul 4/10/05 . chapter 11argh u should hav let the baka die |
LegendaryLostSoul 4/10/05 . chapter 9hey i lik the demon part but u could add more to the match. |
LegendaryLostSoul 4/8/05 . chapter 7yah hiei kicks ass |
LegendaryLostSoul 4/8/05 . chapter 6hey wuts up with that sugarmaster guy. this is great |
LegendaryLostSoul 4/8/05 . chapter 5haha they got a real workout didnt they |
LegendaryLostSoul 4/8/05 . chapter 4u had to add genkai as "old lady". i hate u...well maybe not |
LegendaryLostSoul 4/8/05 . chapter 3hey this story is getting more interesting. but wheres sango and miroku |
LegendaryLostSoul 4/8/05 . chapter 2hmm... |
LegendaryLostSoul 4/8/05 . chapter 1short, but interesting, ill hav 2 keep reading. "Grandma" lol |
Crazy Hyper Lady 2/26/05 . chapter 14You should probable separate you speaking parts better, it was a little hard to read, other that that, I really enjoyed the story plot. |
Christina 1/12/05 . chapter 1 i jus luv this story |
Sean 10/13/04 . chapter 12 *clap clap clap* brilliant! |
sean 10/11/04 . chapter 1 YO! wheres miroku and sango? |