Reviews for 1st year at hogwarts
LegendaryLostSoul 4/10/05 . chapter 14
excellent story all in all. ill be checking the next
LegendaryLostSoul 4/10/05 . chapter 13
hey the last two chapters were pretty good. i lik the fightin.

u might want to chech 4 grammar
LegendaryLostSoul 4/10/05 . chapter 11
argh u should hav let the baka die
LegendaryLostSoul 4/10/05 . chapter 9
hey i lik the demon part but u could add more to the match.
LegendaryLostSoul 4/8/05 . chapter 7
yah hiei kicks ass
LegendaryLostSoul 4/8/05 . chapter 6
hey wuts up with that sugarmaster guy. this is great
LegendaryLostSoul 4/8/05 . chapter 5
haha they got a real workout didnt they
LegendaryLostSoul 4/8/05 . chapter 4
u had to add genkai as "old lady". i hate u...well maybe not
LegendaryLostSoul 4/8/05 . chapter 3
hey this story is getting more interesting. but wheres sango and miroku
LegendaryLostSoul 4/8/05 . chapter 2
hmm...
LegendaryLostSoul 4/8/05 . chapter 1
short, but interesting, ill hav 2 keep reading.

"Grandma" lol
Crazy Hyper Lady 2/26/05 . chapter 14
You should probable separate you speaking parts better, it was a little hard to read, other that that, I really enjoyed the story plot.
Christina 1/12/05 . chapter 1
i jus luv this story
Sean 10/13/04 . chapter 12
*clap clap clap* brilliant!
sean 10/11/04 . chapter 1
YO! wheres miroku and sango?
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