Great. I have yet to be disappointed with one of your Ock-centric stories.

A good story. You might want to change 'noble prize' to 'nobel prize', though. ;)

excellently written! i love stories where you get inside the character's head. thanks for writing this!!

That was an awesome fic! I loved it! ^_^

-Neosun7

That was really awesome! I liked that alot!

This was well written.

Oh, I love this... is so beautiful... more, please *^^*

Ah, what can I say? This was excellently done, some of the best fanfiction that I've had the pleasure of reading. Keep up the good work.

Though, maybe you could have described Otto and Curt a bit? Not everyone is familiar with these characters,though most probably are.

*sniffles quietly*
Lovely piece of writing!
Well done!

It's nice to see Otto's POV at the end and the talk between him and Kurt.

Wow, really nice perspective. Kind of sad for those who've seen the movie though. Because he dies right afterwards... or does he?

that was... really wonderful... wow

Short, but perfect. I really liked it.

Ooh good Story. o.0 But I have more sympathy for Otto Octavius... Bwah, he's my favorite character. But that chappie is very interesting... o.- Made me think at least a little bit more for Peter... But I still like Ock better!

*Sobs* Why'd he have to die??

Very nicely done. One minor quibble: Peter is a sophomore, not a freshman. We see him graduate high school and start college in movie #1, and at the beginning of movie #2 we learn it's been 2 years since Ben's death, which would put the time frame at the end of Peter's sophomore year of college.

Other than that, you did a great job!