no, no end! XD

expand? ;_; I like it a lot! XD

Taiki's so contemplative =3 Hope he goes back someday >

Good, very good glimpse of the character's psyche. It does not need a story unless you have one in mind. What you wrote is like a drawing: write to much and you loose the ability to touch the reader's imagination. Thank you.

yup, it really does sound like a first chapter of a story.

I see you haven't updated in two months but maybe by writing this I can get you to continue. There aren't many stories about Taiki out there and I try to read every one I can since he's my favorite character. Please continue this, it's really good!

That is really great! I think you really captured Taiki's personality (sp?). If you are gonna make more chapters, I think you should add Sugimoto in it. I always thought that those two would make a cool couple, but you don't have to listin to me. If you are gonna make more chapters, update soon!