I just love Luggage.

LOL!

ha ha ha
If only that could be so.
cute

Well that's one way to get rid of pain-in-the-Mik'ta senators! LOL

Cute! Hilarious! ...Can I have a pet Luggage? Oh, yes, anyway. Great storyline. I noticed you appeared to be asking for constructive criticism, so here's what I have to offer. (Don't worry; practically everyone I review hears this.) There were a few places where hiccups in grammar distracted from my reading "experience", but overall, it's fairly well edited and pretty true to the characters. One other thing: when the Luggage sat down at the end of the ramp and you've got a dialogue between Jack, Kinsey, and Hammond(?), it's a little unclear whether it's Hammond or Kinsey speaking in that section.

Again, good job! Well-written! Cheers!

Lol this was hillarious, I have read disc world novels so i love the luggage! Great combination

Yeah!! Kinsey was eaten by a chest. Way to go Chester! Great idea for a story, too bad it hasn't happened in the show.

HaHa, please can we have a sequel?

LOL! I would say 'poor Kinsey' but the bastard deserved it. Great job! A very imaginative way of getting rid of our most hated Earth foe.