Hy!

I like your story, I hope you'll write another chapter.

why'd you stop please dont i want to see how she is reunited wiht her brother and how they accept her or if htey do and if they get angry for her being a sort of slave for the stupid bishop and what not ya know

this is a really cool story i hope that you get more posted soon!

please contimue it is a wonderful story and i want to knwo how the knights reactr when they realize who she is.

Hey, I was reading your story, and it seems really cool! When are you going to write another chapter? Looking forward to it!! :P (I'm Dutch, so I can't help it if my English isn't that good :P)
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Hey, this is a really, reallu good story! Please write more!

hm sounds very interesting. i'm looking forward to more chapters!

This is good fo far, I hope you plan finishing it. I love that Dagonet gave her the doll, that was so sweet! Please update soon!

Amanda

hey! i really like this so far! UPDATE SOON!

Loved it absoloutly loved it. It is such a new take. I really hope that you decide to update soon! bravo!

sounds good so far, update soon.

More please! More!

interesting! UPDATE SOON!

Hi!

I believe I have the great honour of being the first reviewer? Anyway, I really like your story. Can't wait to see how this will turn out. Maybe you could give more details as to how she (a Sarmation girl and pagan) ended up as a scribe with a roman bishop (religious). Is she a slave, if yes, then why would the bishop ask her to come with him? As for your writing, you seem to have someting with corpses?? A horror story other than bloody dungeons with extra girls (besides our Gwen) or bloody battles or lovely ghosts of dead knights would be welcome. Keep it up!