For GODNESS SAKE!

THATS THE SECOND TIME GINGIVERE GETS HUMILIATED!

BOO BOO BOO!

Great I cant wait for more!

Keep it up!

Once again, a wonderful story line, but the trio weren't using the "dibbun language". More specifically they shouldn't always use complete words. They are supposed to be at an age where they have a hard time speaking clearly. As much as I may criticize I still love the story.

It is just as full of mischief as suits it right. Well done.

The Littlest Dibbun

*blinks*

Gonff is following in his father's footsteps, I see. Always insulting the vermin, what a thief.

CHEAP! CHEAP! RIPOFF OF MY FAVORITE CHARACTER! ROT IN THE ABBEY POND YOU SCHMORGENHOOGEN!

ooooohhhhhhhhhhh my god why... this is not good i dont like it you need to lead up when they left redwall. i mean how are dibbans going to get out past the gate.

oooohhhhh mannnnheehee

Ohhhh! This so good. It's a perfect Dibbun's point of view.

Cool

Just to tell you, according to legend Martin didn't leave the Abbey. He still should be around. He became a mouse of peace rememnber?

Heh heh heh...

Yeek. Verminy types AND dibbuns running around in the woods! Run, Uncle Gingivere! Run! :D Oh no! Now I want to know what's going to happen to Gingivere and Sandingom! Suspense...evil... Anyway, great part! You have a nice idea for a story and have so far done a great job writing it!