I love the depth in your writing. I always have, since the days of A Single Spark and reading TftHotM for the first time, and always will. This was haunting and sad, but beautiful. Favorited.

Well-written thankfully. Just read a bunch of crapfic and your fic was relief

omg, this was awesome

Once again I am awed by your amazing word-play. I love the last bit, especially (:

Wow this is really twisted and i like it. Different from the usually happy sappy stories.

This was amazing and so well written. I adored it. Fabulous job!

*sigh* So beautiful, the language you use...And the story. It doesn't need to be hard core sex to make you shiver.

interesting!

a bit confusing but good!

not much M though

Saw the Radiohead references! Nice!

Oh yeah, story was creepy. Like "Climbing Up the Walls." Love it.

...(breathes)...(and again)...(gapes)...

So...magnificent...can't...resist...the prettiness...

good song. crazygood story.

"Madsick" - that is a glorious word. I think I'm going to frame it and tuck it in every night.

Very creepy; insanity is like that. And you can see how Kohaku gives up his chance at sanity and happiness by wanting to help Kagome, by loving Kagome. And she's brining him into darkness with her.

That was a good vision of insanity, or perhaps, dementia.

Seeing people who aren't really there... that was the impression I got.

::wow::

That was interesting.

O.-

okay it was very good. i didn't think i was going to get anything when i put it to this paring. at least it wasn't creepy like when i put it to miroku and rin and came up with three stories. this wasn't as creepy. i got a little confused but it was good.

I think I didn't get it, yet it is good. That didn't make any sense. It was a good short story!