This is wonderful! I found it through the LiveJournal crack_van community, and I really enjoyed it. I like the way Lorelai babbles in her thoughts, just as she does verbally. You do a good job of reflecting the way she thinks.

Here through a rec in the livejournal community crack_van. I love this pairing and this is one of the best stories I've read with them, filled with anticipation and also gives a lovely shade to the scenes of that episode. Love it. So much promise in the air and the "things she knows" are so in-character, too. Good job.

Really well written. I liked it alot. Some things are just right.

This is seriously, in 3 years of reading here, one of the best stories I have read. I love it & everything about it. Very original :D

~Brie

This is a great story

Incredibly done. Love it.
LP

this is written so beautifully; I love it!

I like it. Very vague, and had me lost there for a while at the beginning when I thought *Lorelai* was getting married. But I see now. And I like it.

I've read this many times now, Lula, and it still doesn't fail to amaze me. You captured everything about the situation, especially Lorelai's thoughts and point of view, absolutely perfectly.

Wow! That was really amazing. So I'm reading this thing and as I realize it I suddenly jump up from my chair and yell: "That's Lorelai!" Which granted warranted a lot of strange looks from my family, but hey, what can you do? Anyway, it really IS Lorelai, how I imagine her mind woulb be. So, Great Job.

This is lovely!

This is great. So realistic, and so romantic.

Very sweet I love it!

Frickin' excellent...write more on this, definitely...

Oh I just finished voting for this at the ficathon, thought I'd let you know that I loved it. You're an excellent writer and the things she knew were very Lorelai, and her feelings about Luke were great. Keep writing!