That was great fun :)

Gods he's a smug bastard. Snapes been planning that conversation for a very long time.
I do love your characterisation of Severus and what a bushy-haired know-it-all would do if sent back to the past. It fits in quite well and I bet the pair of them would've gotten on quite well as teenagers. Even if half their conversations were arguments over a favourite library seat.
I'd love to read any expansion on this, I think you'd be quite good at a Time Turner story.
Sincerely,
Scales

Oh, the final line is perfect...proving just which house she REALLY belongs in.

Very clever and inventive! It's refreshing to hear something original and well written. Your mind's library must have an incredible number of ideas stored up.

Ha, that was great! A wonderful take on the oh-so-out-done timeturner fics.

LMAO. That is absolutely hilarious.
:P , ten points for being an insufferable geek chorus
:P:P Those points should go to slytherin as well.
I love it!

lol @ that! Love the house-point madness, and *Severus*

keep writing!

This was fun! Leaving the dramatization of the past up to our imaginations and a few dozen stories we might have read before.

Very clever. An interesting time-turner-goes-wrong short story. I love how your stuff seems to always have that potential to continue, but at the same time be completely fine as a stand-alone.

hahah the ending is so cute

That was such a good story!! I loved it.

Oh my gosh...this was an amazing idea. I really liked this and the originality of it. You took a plot line that is a complete chliche` and turned it into something new. It's wonderful!

Now for the bit of my review you might ignore. I think this would make a great full-length story. You might not support the idea ((I myself only recently started reading them)) but there are a lot of Snape/Hermione romances out there. This would make a great one if you continued it...just a suggestion.

Anyway, great story!

That was very interesting and so much more intriuging than when Hermione does decide to be a Cassandra (and of course does have an effect on the future) even though those can sometimes be quite good. The incident with the house points at the end was extreamely amusing. Now what's this about Moaning Myrtle being Minerva's favorite student? Wasn't she before her time?

Very nice short story. Any potential for a sequel? You've already setup that Severus had feelings for her, did she have feelings for him? I hope that your schedule and muse will allow you to write more stories sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm

I love this! That really was about the best solution to the typical time-turner story, and certainly the most canon solution! And the writing was quite nice too, very in character I thought. Good job!