wonderful story

great fight scenes, good work portraying Chi-chi with all her firepower.

Last night i had a horrible nightmare about zergs it was so real... After i woke up, i was so scared that i was looking around for zergs. Good saga author i'm re-reading it

I'm lovin it¡ I'm re-readin it...

Another great chapter.

Another awesome chapter I will read more!

Good beginning chapter I hope Verto will be able to unlock some of his potential I'll read more later

Hey Man, I really liked your four stories. Sorry I couldn't review per chapter, I copied your stories chapter for chapter and read 'em at home cause Ì'm low on money for this internet cafe. I really enjoyed reading your stories though, being an avid fan of both DBZ and Starcraft myself. I can't wait on your new installments. I would try to find someone to help you out with proofreading, but your story rocks. Keep it up, Dave.

-Kanifer

yo, this is one of the best stories i've read so far.Hope you write more in the future.

That was awesome man, I can't wait to see the next installment! Be sure to get it to us all soon, alright?

Hey love the last two chapters I have to say they are getting really interesting. Write more soon.
Auz

stupid thing what i ment to say from the recenint WOW YOUR ALIVE when will you get on star craft cause im avayable for awhile

WOW YOUR ALIVE

Thanks for answering, btw I never looked at your bio I only really have read a couple of my favorite authors bios. I just got done reading through a good chunk of your story and wouldn't of questioned anything, but then you posted some numbers and it got me thinking about pls. I could by dbgts explanation which was gohan can't go mystic anymore and he really didn't train much for 10 years. Although this is pretty diffrent from between the buu and cell sagas were gohan didn't train much, but he still gained a little bit of power.
Anyway, I'm ok with it has long as the reason for his not gaining as much power in super mystic isn't because hes half-saiyan, but I could buy because he doesn't have a s much potential(even though he has a lot in the series). If anything it appears male half-saiyans appear to gain power faster then normal saiyans (i.e. Gohan going from the verge of being a super saiyan to being on the verge of super saiyan 2 in one years worth of training with goku in the time chamber during the cell saga. Or goten and trunks early ss transformations)
A good idea for you would be to post answers to reviewers questions at the bottom of a chapter so that people don't ask the same questions again and anyone whos pondering something doens't even have to ask if someone else aready did.

Author: Read my bio since i cant get your email, there is a small explaination at the end of it, maybe a fact or two that you missed. (It's okay it happens)