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sprinklersAHOY!
2008-04-20 . chapter 16
*sigh*...
misswinta
2008-03-31 . chapter 6
ENYA! SAVIOR OF THE WORLD!
Alexandria J
2007-11-04 . chapter 16
Loved it!! i was really surprised with the Beowulf comment. I had to read that for English 12 and although I read a lot of things, it was kind of boring. Anyway, I hope you continue writing fics, especially code lyoko ones.
OoZolaoO
2007-10-08 . chapter 16
About all my critical reviews: don't get me wrong, I like your ideas. I also commend you for developing a plot well enough so that it wasn't too stretched out when you finished the story. Great job.

Chris's character is relatively well-rounded, though it would be nice if some of his faults were more developed.

And remember, the course of true love never did run smooth. Yumi and Chris's relationship is a bit too flawless.

'S my job to be critical. Excellent, and I look forward to seeing more Lyoko fics from you in the future. ^^

~Zola
xxbeni.music
2007-10-08 . chapter 14
GASP! Nice chap^^ Nice ending too, I'm gonna miss this story...

-Gabs.
OoZolaoO
2007-10-08 . chapter 14
“Abandon ship! Chrises and Yumis first!” XDD

For a final battle, it was half-decent. I feel like X.A.N.A. was a little too Lord Voldemort-ish. The group has more trouble with monsters on Lyoko than they had with X.A.N.A.

Saving my final critique for the final chapter!
OoZolaoO
2007-10-02 . chapter 13
Still don't think you're portraying Yumi right.

I love the idea, though. 7 out of 10.
melcho
2007-10-01 . chapter 13
great chapter, please upload soon!!
Jemnezmy
2007-10-01 . chapter 13
ne ne this is, again, realy good.
Happy happy!
xxbeni.music
2007-10-01 . chapter 13
Aw, I luv Nickelback^^

Sweet chappie, can't wait to see what happens next!

P.D Odd and Sissi? ...Wao...

-Gabs.^o^U
Jemnezmy
2007-09-30 . chapter 12
Hiyas!
Great great chapter.
Love it and hope you update as soon as you can!
OoZolaoO
2007-09-04 . chapter 8
*applause*

Have I been reviewing this story so far? *goes off to look*

Two points. It's 'Scaner', not 'Scan', and it's Kadic, not Cadic.
Jemnezmy
2007-09-02 . chapter 11
No!
I was starting to like Molly.
Anyways love the story so far.
Update as soon as you can!
melcho
2007-09-02 . chapter 11
great chapter, please upload soon!!
xxbeni.music
2007-09-01 . chapter 10
Yay! New chappie^^ Normaly Yumi/Oc don't get me so rilled but ur fic has defenitly got me hooked up^^
Luvv ur writting!

Peace!
-Gabs.
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