 sprinklersAHOY! 2008-04-20 . chapter 16 *sigh*... |
 misswinta 2008-03-31 . chapter 6 ENYA! SAVIOR OF THE WORLD! |
 Alexandria J 2007-11-04 . chapter 16Loved it!! i was really surprised with the Beowulf comment. I had to read that for English 12 and although I read a lot of things, it was kind of boring. Anyway, I hope you continue writing fics, especially code lyoko ones. |
 OoZolaoO 2007-10-08 . chapter 16About all my critical reviews: don't get me wrong, I like your ideas. I also commend you for developing a plot well enough so that it wasn't too stretched out when you finished the story. Great job.
Chris's character is relatively well-rounded, though it would be nice if some of his faults were more developed.
And remember, the course of true love never did run smooth. Yumi and Chris's relationship is a bit too flawless.
'S my job to be critical. Excellent, and I look forward to seeing more Lyoko fics from you in the future. ^^
~Zola |
 xxbeni.music 2007-10-08 . chapter 14GASP! Nice chap^^ Nice ending too, I'm gonna miss this story...
-Gabs. |
 OoZolaoO 2007-10-08 . chapter 14“Abandon ship! Chrises and Yumis first!” XDD
For a final battle, it was half-decent. I feel like X.A.N.A. was a little too Lord Voldemort-ish. The group has more trouble with monsters on Lyoko than they had with X.A.N.A.
Saving my final critique for the final chapter! |
 OoZolaoO 2007-10-02 . chapter 13Still don't think you're portraying Yumi right.
I love the idea, though. 7 out of 10. |
 melcho 2007-10-01 . chapter 13 great chapter, please upload soon!! |
 Jemnezmy 2007-10-01 . chapter 13ne ne this is, again, realy good.
Happy happy! |
 xxbeni.music 2007-10-01 . chapter 13Aw, I luv Nickelback^^
Sweet chappie, can't wait to see what happens next!
P.D Odd and Sissi? ...Wao...
-Gabs.^o^U |
 Jemnezmy 2007-09-30 . chapter 12Hiyas!
Great great chapter.
Love it and hope you update as soon as you can! |
 OoZolaoO 2007-09-04 . chapter 8*applause*
Have I been reviewing this story so far? *goes off to look*
Two points. It's 'Scaner', not 'Scan', and it's Kadic, not Cadic. |
 Jemnezmy 2007-09-02 . chapter 11No!
I was starting to like Molly.
Anyways love the story so far.
Update as soon as you can! |
 melcho 2007-09-02 . chapter 11 great chapter, please upload soon!! |
 xxbeni.music 2007-09-01 . chapter 10Yay! New chappie^^ Normaly Yumi/Oc don't get me so rilled but ur fic has defenitly got me hooked up^^
Luvv ur writting!
Peace!
-Gabs. |