GO SILMARILLION! Even though I never finished the book because it confused me so much. But still, YAY!

Oh, wow! I'd never have thought of this pairing...I thought the speaker was Morgoth right up until the end.

I love your epigraph, and I love the line "Yet even now the sea and the stars dance together, and only the wind blows cold between them." Beautiful. Just beautiful.

O! You gave me goosebumps. Beautiful :)

O. Poor Ulmo! (At first I thought he was stalking about Manwe. They used to be great friends, you know. But after the making of the world, they drifted apart fairly quickly.)

good quote. good story, however short. i think the brevity is good, bcuz it stays with the Valar, bcuz they rarely speak at long intervals. i like the "another voice whispered to you on the winds", which is a discreet, but beautiful way of saying bloody Melkor. that paragraph is good. the sea and stars dance together-i can just picture that. good story, lovely word usage

Marvelously done! I love the levels of this drabble. It's either very obvious or very subtle, and I can't decide which. Really well done. I applaud you.