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Reviews For: Altenbier

ehxhfdl14
2007-07-30
ch 1,
abusexD Hawkeye's just good that way. I loved this whole fic!
P.S. Welcome to the Dark Side. Once you cross over, there's no going back!
Desdemona Lefay
2007-06-12
ch 1,
abuseI really liked it. (and... um, I thought Amestris WAS the alternate version of Germany. But, uh, they never really explain that well, do they?)

Altenbier is the best!
makenzi
2007-01-07
ch 1,
abusei have to say that i REALLY enjoyed reading this. It like your witting style, it was awesome. really like this
*favs*
Cassiel Darkmoon
2005-10-02
ch 1,
abusehmm...i might be willing to give beer a chance when i turn 21...>.> might be...fun...
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...yeah..
mmmslash
2005-07-08
ch 1,
abuseOh how that warms my heart! That was too funny. I loved all of the banter that they could hear out of Mustang's office. "Just like that" indeed! I also love the not-really-denied-but-not-out-in-the-open relationship that they have in this fic. Thanks for the brilliant, well-written work!
Freaky Person O.o
2005-06-29
ch 1,
abuseha ha ha!! so funny and so good!! you make 1:30 am enjoyable!!
Kegom
2005-03-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was so great!

I loved Hawkeyes attitude and this sentence:
"...the staff freezes guiltily (all except one, whose beer has quietly disappeared somewhere inside her desk. If a full team of tracking-dogs and Hughes himself had searched the desk, the beer would still have stayed hidden; she’s good that way)"
had me laughing tears! I can just imagine Hawkeye being like that!

And the beer... *laugh* Well, unfortunately I don´t drink beer although I´m German, but that is _exactly_ what I´ve observed happening in some offices I know on a Friday afternoon - and on many other afternoons as well... (and it is my firm believe that some working areas could really use some beer on a warm afternoon... after all beer was seen as healthier as water anyway for a long, long time...)

Anyways, you did a great job at catching the atmosphere on a (rather)uneventful friday afternoon and I really hope you ´ll write some more RoyxEd slashies!

Read ya,
Kegom

PS: They might not be in Germany, but for example the name "von Hohenheim" certainly has a German feel to it, so why not?
YukaYuka
2005-03-01
ch 1,
abuseXD Waa, that's really cute~
cowgirlnoir
2004-11-14
ch 1,
abusethis is adorable and, yes, sehr Deutsch. Germans can open a beer bottle with *anything*

Would love to see more in this vein, even thought I know it's a lucky Friday oneshot ;)
Kloudy Reignfall
2004-11-10
ch 1,
abuseHahaha! That's so cute! ^_^
“WHO ARE YOU CALLING TOO IMMATURE TO DRI—MMPH!
Shimegami-chan
2004-08-22
ch 1,
abuseI liked it, it was light and short and happy and Roy. Nice work. :)
Stardancer1
2004-08-21
ch 1,
abuseWelcome to the Dark Side, bwaahaha...

This was great fun, Ed being Ed angry and helpfull and about to er-help Roy out? The office gang is hysterical and Hawkeye is one smart lady. And Roy? Being his usual helpful self...heheheheh. A Great start now for some more fics.
CheeseLemon
2004-08-17
ch 1,
abuse-wipes tears from her eyes- That was too funny...I really enjoyed the part “Do NOT make me spill my beer or I’ll have to hurt you". That cracked me up so bad! Probably I come from a german family, so beer isn't a issue for us ^_^ Great job for your "first even-vaguely-Roy/Ed-slashy-thing fic" ^_^
Riana1
2004-08-17
ch 1,
abusePerfect. Ed/Roy can sometimes be a train wreck but you make it work beautfully. The idea of the entire staff hearing it *all* and playing matchmaker had me rolling in the aisles with laughter. Hawkeye deserves to be nominated for sainthood if she can put up with this with a straight face.
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