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| centrefuge 2001-04-08 ch 13, anon. | abuseWrite More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More!Write More! Please? Pretty Please? With Sugar on top? And candy? and whiped cream? Why are you even reading this? Write al;ready! |
| Vanes 2001-02-22 ch 13, anon. | abuseHey! You never got S&B together, you'd better write more stories soon! Any ways, really really good story! ~Vanessa |
| @ 2001-02-22 ch 12, anon. | abuseThat was an awesome story!!! |
| Vanes 2001-02-17 ch 10, anon. | abuseThis story is so awesome! I read chapter 11 on SHC and I can't believe what you did to Bo and Jeffrey, I want to know what happens now! Continue soon! |
| @ 2001-02-17 ch 10, anon. | abuseStop with the cliffhangers, on with the story j/k It was great! |
| Vanes 2001-02-13 ch 6, anon. | abuseBoth this and chapter 7 were great! ~Vanessa |
| @ 2001-02-13 ch 7, anon. | abuseGetting really good! Continue soon! |
| Aimslee 2001-02-11 ch 5,  | abuseNot bad at all. Please continue, I'd love to read more. |
| @ 2001-02-09 ch 5, anon. | abuseContinue soon, this is really getting interesting! |
| Vanes 2001-02-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseThat was good, nice how you explained Jeffrey's past, continue soon! ~Vanessa |
| @ 2001-02-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseYikes, a cliff hanger! Aargh, continue soon :) |
| HA Senidal 2001-02-05 ch 2, | abuseEvil strikes! Nice look into Jeffrey's past. Now I know how Mark became deaf and I'm wondering who the driver was. I'm guessing a member of the "color brigade" (Brown, right?). Love the detail. Spotted one spelling error (it's "millionaire"), but I won't sic the grammar hounds after you. Now continue to write! I command thee! Besides, you're making more progress in your writing than me :o) |
| HA Senidal 2001-02-05 ch 1, | abuseOK, X-Files atmosphere complete with shadowy cabal. To be honest, MGM, I was thinking of ENIGMA a little as I read this part, but I shan't complain. After all, somewhere out there, a James Bond fan sees similarities between ENIGMA and SPECTRE and an anime fan might see some influences (at least later). Anyway, nice set-up for the story. Keep it up. I hope to see what happens next. ENIGMA forever! Sorry, I couldn't help myself...;oP |
| Vanes 2001-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseMore soon!! ~Vanessa |